Poem response 3

Love by Justin Bandy 

Love is a flower 
it starts with the seed 
it grows stronger only if well nurished 
it must be fed with laughter 
and watered with tears 
winds come as they may 
can the flower stand its ground? 
\If the flower blows away in the wind 
its seeds still spread 
love is a flower in all its beauty.

I like the feel to this poem because it shows that love can't stand alone it hast to be worked on in order to grow and how it is like a flower and a flower needs a seed it is a metaphor because the seed and the flower can be people for example. 

Poetry response 2

Social Media

by Amaiso Nensy 

facebook is mother 
friendster is the ancestor 
other is twitter 

I like how Amaiso went with this haiku 

she is showing how poetry can be written 

about anything and turn it into something 

clever and good.

 

gamsterlishious

Oh ya oh ya

my name is Gem

and I can't rhyme because

I don't have the time

oh ya oh ya

I got rhymes that make money

and mad rhymes that don't stop

i'm the king of online

and dominate black ops

Oh ya oh ya

I'm like a dime  

but i can't say any more because I have run outta time

oh ya oh ya